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Missing You |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA 
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I lie here alone and naked beneath the comfort of the quilt that we picked out on our honeymoon. I pull your pillow close to me and bury my face in my memories of you. Your scent still lingers throughout this house, you know... I picked up a towel from the bottom of the bath closet yesterday... A bottle of your perfume rolled across the floor and stopped at my feet... I sprayed a little into the air and just stood there, missing you.... Christopher M. Grimm Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Oh chris..this was so sad  ..I know how you feel too...been there...if this really happened, and you need to talk, e-mail me...sweetcollege_girl_99@yahoo.com...k?"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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TrueWoman New Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 2 |
Chris, This is so true...missing someone is so much more than just in your head; it's a taste, a smell or a touch. |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Chris~ I understand this ache so well. You wrote it beautifully. Missing is more than an emotion,it is a substance that can choke the air out of a house. Great poem.-SEA |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
A touching piece, Chris...nicely expressed. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Chris, what can I say but Excellent! Wonderful touching piece of writing Chris!  Denise |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Thanks everyone for your sweet replies. IT means alot to me. Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very well written, and engaging Like it a lot Liz |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Thanks Liz....kind comments are ALWAYS appreciated. LOL. Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Hit the mark Chris. I sit here by myself, Girlfriend out of town feeling the way you described and you nailed it. Great poem Thanx, Rich |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ChrisG~ This one tears at the heart. It's so beautiful. What tender, touching memories to confront. Cherish those things that allow you to recall the love ... someday the fragrance may disperse, but linger in it's luxurious fragrance while you may. Hopefully, another perfume will fill the rooms of your heart. Chris~ I really like this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Thanks Marge and Spiked. I appreciate the kind responses. Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
....a very beautiful piece that needed no fancy words to get its message across....just lovely.  Bobbycat =^..^= |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
These are excellent feelings....so real you can almost taste them. Good work. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Sometimes...simpler is better... thanks bobbycat and balladeer. Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You pull those special details out of the missing and make it so real. Very well done! |
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