Dialogue (Just trying something different)

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Open Poetry #6

Dialogue (Just trying something different)

CMGrimm
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since 2000-02-14

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0 posted 2000-02-16 11:59 PM

Dialogue

You ask me, "Have you loved before?"
"Felt a feeling inside, that you just can't ignore"

I answer, "Never."

You ask me, "Have you opened your eyes?"
"To a love that's so great, you just can't disguise?"

I answer, "Never."

You ask me, "Have you ever felt needed?"
"Like your time was well spent, and should be repeated?"

I answer, "Never."
I'm thinking, "Before you."

To Renee.

Christopher M. Grimm

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

spiked
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since 2000-01-13

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Hammond, La USA

1 posted 2000-02-17 12:07 PM

I love the way you express your love for your wife in this. As she is the one and only you have loved. Great job
Rich

Meadowmuse
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2 posted 2000-02-17 12:16 PM

This is lovely, Chris. So much said in this short conversation...thanks for sharing it here.

Nikkisweet
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3 posted 2000-02-17 12:16 PM

How sweet.....

freckles
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Virginia USA

4 posted 2000-02-17 06:05 PM

Different obviously works for you, Chris. I enjoyed the dialogue, both verbal and mental.

[This message has been edited by freckles (edited 02-17-2000).]

mete out
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5 posted 2000-02-18 06:19 AM

This pooem is so beautiful and also very relavent to me as i have recently gotten engaged. your poem describes the emotins of my love perfectly...thanks for sharing.

I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

Marge Tindal

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6 posted 2000-02-18 07:30 AM

Chris Grimm~
This is a lovely departure.

"Have you ever felt needed?
Like your time was well spent,
and should be repeated?"

Now THAT is a wonderful thought process.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Shelley
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since 2000-01-27

Posts 263
Ohio, USA

7 posted 2000-02-18 07:41 AM

This was very beautiful. Questions I think we all need to ask ourselves.

CMGrimm
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since 2000-02-14

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8 posted 2000-02-18 08:32 AM

Thanks everyone for the sweet responses.

You've all made my day.

Chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
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9 posted 2000-02-18 09:00 AM

CMGrimm,

It,s nice to hear the love coming from this poem that is between the two of you, it is refreashing.

Cerenity

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