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Marina
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since 2000-02-10
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Pickering, Ontario
0 posted 2000-02-16 11:57 AM

Hand of Fate


Hands that ache, Heads that bow
Thoughts that hurt, Hearts that break
Shoulders barring a broken vow


Hands of guilt, Heads of shame
Thoughts of honour, Hearts of grace
Shoulders carrying unjust blame


Hand in hand, Heads in sync
Thoughts in rhythm, Heart’s in love
Shoulders carrying a fused link

Marina Feb 14/2000
© Copyright 2000 Marina Crossley - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-02-16 04:47 PM

A uniquely written poem that has depth and expression.  Very nice indeed!
D
Marina
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since 2000-02-10
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Pickering, Ontario
2 posted 2000-02-16 05:02 PM

Danny: Thankyou, I really appreciate your comment.  This is only  the second poem I have ever written.

Marina
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