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You've Kept the Faith (by Krystal, one of Nan's 8th graders)
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You've Kept the Faith (by Krystal, one of Nan's 8th graders) |
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Class Member
since 1999-12-21
Posts 93In Poetry Class |
 You've kept the Faith, though times were hard Indeed, the ways are still rough. You've trusted God who leads your life, For you He's been enough. My joy still shines upon your face Though inside I am crying; The gentle baby inside you sees your trust And those tears you are hiding. Pour out your heart - Tell all to me.. That's what I'm waiting for. Ask any question and state your case; I've opened a wide door. Go boldly to the throne of Grace, We're told to in His word.. Then hear me whisper in your heart, The sweetest words you've ever heard. I'll carry you, dear friend of mine, You've trusted me and waited. Close tight his robe, I'll see you through You've kept the Faith in everything you do... from Krystal [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 02-16-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krystal~ You speak with the love that a friend needs to hear. Wonderful, my dear. Just wonderful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
What a sweet poem. That is exactly how I feel about my best friend. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Such wise words for one so young....nicely written  |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Krystal....once again. WOW!! I loved it. Very very sweet. Chris |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Such sweet words of friendship and love Such friendships we have seldom off Written so lovely and well in style I read it twice just to remian here for a while One line perhaps belongs to you "You've kept the Faith in everything you do..." What a poem and what an ending, bravo. < !signature--> The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. [This message has been edited by HelmutB (edited 02-16-2000).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...You keep the faith as well, my friend... It will serve you well... ...and don't forget to behave in class today too...   |
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