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A few of my favorite things
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A few of my favorite things |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
A few of my favorite things… Blowing dandelion wishes Unknown ‘breakfast in bed’ dishes Doctored scraped knee dismays Single flower head bouquets Grass stained pirouette spins Shiny gapped tooth grins Outgrown purple satin bows Goofy mothers day shows Carefully hand crafted mud pies Red handed cookie jar alibis Van Gough finger paintings Successful potty training Bedtime bathroom stalls Middle of the night water calls Chasing closet monster blues With Pooh Bears night light hues Hurts healed with a simple kiss From mommy’s magical lips Happy hugs from tiny arms Payment for nursery rhyme charms Hershey chocolate baby fingers Memories that continue and linger Just a few of my favorite things…. Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
Wonderful poem. I really liked it. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Wonderfully sweet poem. I loved it. Seems like a few of my favorite things also. haha. Chris |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Well...thanks guys...  )I personally think it is goofy as hell...*L* But I wanted to try something different... Thanks for being brave enough to read it.. )Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Goofy as hell? I think it's just wonderfully original and, well, wonderful!  'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Great work! This gives us a creative look at who you are, Breathe. Exellent! *Krista Knutson* One lives in the hope of becoming a memory. ~*Antonio Porchia*~ |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
From a mom point of view, this was absolutely fabulous, I loved it! |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
A few years ago, I would've read something like this and thought, "Eh...it's okay", and not given it a second thought, but now that I AM a mother, it takes on a whole new meaning.....I loved this very much--I can relate!!! Thanks! Bobbycat =^..^= ~~Blessed Be!~~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Breathe~ You take my breath away with this one. Silly ? Silly ? NOT ! Tender, loving, reach-out-and-touch-me thoughts to melt the heart of this mom. If it wasn't so late at night, I'd call every one of my children and HUG 'em with Mommy-Mush ! Shucks, think I will anyway ! I LOVE THIS ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Popping this one back to the top ! Just to good to miss ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I like this one...it had me singing the song from Sound Of Music |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
from a mom...and a grandma whose joy right now is the little one who she is lucky to have living with her right now...this is precious...I have a baby picture of him named "oreos"....lol...your baby fingers covered in chocolate reminds me of him....great images |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Carefully hand crafted mud pies Red handed cookie jar alibis Van Gough finger paintings Successful potty training  I love this so happy and sweet Jenny |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is wonderfully delightful! Denise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh yes, all of these wonderful things are so wonderful....so is this sweet and tender poem. |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Wow! Thanks everyone SOOOO much! I was a bit unsure of this...as rhyming is not something I have really done before...all in all...the poem has great meaning to me...and I am thrilled that you all enjoyed...*grin* and MARGE! *more hugs* You are such a sweetie! Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
It seem`s no matter how bad thing`s get,those "Happy hugs from tiny arm`s" will always put a smile in our heart`s. This really is a sweet lil writing. Thank`s for sharing Breathe~ Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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