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My One And Only Love (Acrostic Valentine for my Wife)
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My One And Only Love (Acrostic Valentine for my Wife) |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
My love, my life, my wife You are all this and more One heart, one soul, one whole Now and for evermore Element of my bliss Answer to all I dream Nirvana in your kiss Desire met supreme Only you can there be Nestled within my heart Love for eternity Yours from the very start Love sowed by you and I Ours from the past we share Voucher for the future Evermore in your care |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This is the epitome of sweetness and devotion...such a love you must have! Claire |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
She sure must be special A very nice poem you created for her Thank you for letting us see this The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Absolutely beautiful Scott....she's one lucky woman  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Scott, Well done, I enjoyed the poem. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Andrew- This is lovely. It should just melt a gal's heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sir Andrew, your devotion to your wife and family has always been a true inspiration. You are indeed a great man. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh Andrew, this is so beautiful! I'm sure she'll love it! Denise |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Thank you, one and all for your kindness. Indeed she loved the poem to the point of tears. Your words here are icing on the cake. Hope you all had good a Valentine's Day. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Very good read Andrew....I had to print this one out to show my wife. (Of course I will receive a ribbing for it..."Why can't you be sweet like that??" She has a real way with words she does.) Thanks anyhow. Chris |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Such sweet Oncoming emotion Surley she loved it Why wouldn't she? Everything about the poem Everything is her Truly a great poem an acrostic for you  stay cool Andrew  ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
CMGrimm: I am flatterd that you would do so... should you receive any grief, reminder her that some men wouldn't even take the time to find such beauty... and that its kind of like giving her flowers... you didn't grow them but they're a symbol of your love just the same. Peace!Sweetcollege Girl... Very cool right back at cha... and thanks for the acrostic. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful sweet devotion in words. Lovely! |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Sweet and impressive, both an acrostic and rhymed. Well done! |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Martie and Beki... thank you for looking in and for your kind words. My best to you both. |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
My love, my life, my wife You are all this and more One heart, one soul, one whole Now and for evermore...... Them four lines alone show both your devotion and the love that you have for your wife. The two of you are very lucky to have each other. I hope that she was able to read this? Thank`s for sharing this Andrew Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. |
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