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The Vines of Love
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The Vines of Love |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
 The Vines of LoveThe vines of Love's embrace have found me reeling Entangled through my heart with fevered feeling As our hearts, now woven, merge in pulsing fashion Reaching tendrils cling and coil with pure love's passion And through the flowing, fluid whisperings of emotion These Vines of Love surround and seal our hearts' devotion Happy Valentines Day Everyone ~ Claire ~ |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Beautifully expressed. May you gaze upon a shining star tonight and be touched by its slendor. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ah that such devotion could be sealed and clung to forever. I am envious. Beautiful poem, Claire. Michael |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
thanks claire! Happy Valentine's Day to you too!  Great poem! stay cool claire  ~~Lavada~~ |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Lady of the Meadow... how beautiful are your words... perfect for the day and the heart. I also like the choice of font... works well with the poem. Have a wonderful day. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Mike...thank you for that beautiful wish. May your gaze and heart rest upon that same star of splendor. Michael...no need for envy, at least where I'm concerned ~ this was written mostly from memory. I do thank you for reading, though, and am pleased that you liked this. Lavada...thanks for reading, and I'll try to stay cool!  Claire |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Claire I like those vines of love. Hope you have a special valentines day. James |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Beautiful words to a beautiful occation Such softness and devotion Wonderful The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Very well done. I am completely intrigued by the amount of passion and expertise and professionalism...and ....well...I'm just intrigued. Loved it. cmg |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Very Sweet Claire. And now i have 4 little word`s for you. HAPPY VALENTINE`S DAY CLAIRE Hope your Love find`s it`s way into another`s heart.Thank`s for sharing  Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. [This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-14-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Andrew...Thank you for reading and for your kind and touching words...so glad you enjoyed my poem. James...thank you so much, for the kinds words, and the beating heart. I hope your evening is special as well. Helmut...thank you for reading this and sharing your thoughts...I'm so glad you liked this. (((you))) CMG...professionalism?? intrigue?? I don't know, I just write what I feel. Thanks for reading and letting me know you liked! Wizzard...What four little words can do to a heart! Thank you so much for such a sweet message. Hope your day is blessed with love. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Happy Valentines Day Claire...and like the clinging vine, I held onto each and every word of this....beautiful in content and form |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Thank you, Ms. Hoot Owl. So glad you enjoyed this poem...I wondered if it was too "mushy"... I guess it was alright..lolClaire |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Yeah, it was too mushy! Just teasing Claire. This is actually bordering on erotic in the "feel" of it! It seems to breathe passion to the reader. Ethereal in a very real sort of way! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Your words are so lovely, Claire. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Christopher...thanks for reading, even if it was too mushy! I'm glad the erotic quality came through...I was attempting a movement toward that direction, but with a sense of subtlety. Martie...thank you so much, Martie. A wonderful compliment coming from you. Claire |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
lovely sentimesnts, and very well expressed. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Jeez, Claire, you have me down on the floor from the subtle power (somehow, not an oxymoron) in your words. You've talked about love in many of its facets all in so few verses. Teach me, mold me. Well, okay, I won't go THAT far, but I will say, great poem! Mike |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ This is absolutely beautiful. The intertwining of the limbs of love is very sensually done. How very, very much I admire your work. You paint upon the canvas, a masterpiece. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Gunslinger...Thank you for reading this one, and for the kindly response. Mike...Thanks for saying all that you said. Marge...we are in mutual admiration, then. Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed this. Claire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Meadow, Don't know how this one got past me. Lovely words, lovely poem. *L* Sy |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm with you, Sy... Very nice, Claire..  |
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