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tracie66
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0 posted 2000-02-14 04:23 AM




Little bird Be Free


Fly little bird, up into the sky
Fly so high, free bye and bye

I watch you soar then flit about
"Free at last" I want to shout

No longer caged, you've been set free
you're now out there for all to see

So fly little bird, fly and be free
No longer are you in captivity

Free to go wherever the wind blows
To set you free is what I chose


~Fly Little bird~

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Michael
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1 posted 2000-02-14 04:28 AM


I find a strange peace about me in reading this and yet a sadness too.  Good little poem, likes me much.

Michael

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2 posted 2000-02-14 07:01 AM


An anmazing sense of freedom and sadness in the same poem.
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3 posted 2000-02-14 07:16 AM


Tracie~
This just HAD to be for me.
I just lost my African Gray to the
freedom of the 'back to nature' life.
She never lived in a cage, but then
she didn't exactly fly free either.
Boo~ Hoo~  But I like to think that
she now talks to all of the other birds
who never knew a voice.
Imagine ... they sing ... she talks.
I'm sad about her loss and do hope she
finds her way back home, but if she
doesn't ... then I like to think that
she now flies freely with the breeze.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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tracie66
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4 posted 2000-02-15 05:08 AM


Michael as I was writing this I felt like you said a strange peace about me as well, and yet some sadness also. I'm glad you liked it, thanks for your reply          Silvershaddow thanks for reading and replying I appreciate it.     OH Marge I'm so sorry, I'm sure she is soaring around out there looking down on the world thinking how lucky she is...HUGS Tracie
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