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WhtDove
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0 posted 2000-02-14 12:32 PM


I am tired of winter and find myself longing for those summer nights again.

I long for awesome sunsets
Someone to share them with,
Romantic walks along the beach
A passionate, tender kiss.
I long for summer nights
To lay beneath the moon,
Make love under twinklin stars
Or in the park at noon.
I long for summer dances
In a field filled high with wheat,
Or the coldness of a stream
Where we could hang our feet.
Romantic dinners by candlelight
A loving word from you,
A warm and steamy bath
With bubbles filled for two.




 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins

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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2000-02-14 12:36 PM


may a try to be the first to say very sweet sentiments ther but Dove! makin love in the park at noon woowoo i didnt know yuh had it in yuh!!
Denise
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2 posted 2000-02-14 12:39 PM


Beautiful, Rebecca! I'm ready too!

(but like Walt said what's with this making love in the park at noon? hehehehe)

Denise

CrazyChick
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3 posted 2000-02-14 12:40 PM


great job!!  I can't wait till summer either       it can be so romantic!
Poet deVine
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4 posted 2000-02-14 12:41 PM


Beautiful, Rebecca! This is so romantic.. a perfect addition to Valentine's Day...  

WhtDove
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5 posted 2000-02-14 12:51 PM


Walt, you would pick that out wouldn't ya?  haha...one never knows...hahaha

LOL Denise!  Thanks sweetie! Uh I take the 5th, can I do that? haha

Crazy Chick, I can't wait either! Thanks!

Devine thank you! Yea, that warms your heart even if it's cold outside!  



 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins

lucky
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since 2000-01-17
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6 posted 2000-02-14 05:39 AM


Verrrry nice Rebecca,
But the only park around here is Glacier Park and it's not really my cup of tea but then again I suppose theyr's ya alls out theyr who be liken ice tea.
Again very nice.

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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7 posted 2000-02-14 06:16 AM


Angel, woohoo this is something, really special it is not to mention beautiful and romantic. Loved it well Done!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2000-02-14 07:38 AM


WhiteDove~
Lovely, just lovely.
Been there ... done that !
Look forward to Spring
to do it again !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
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9 posted 2000-02-14 10:55 AM


LOL Lucky! All right y'all, get off the park thing! hahaha  Thank you Lucky!

DA, thanks girlfriend! Hugs to ya girl, miss ya round lately...

Marge thank you! I look forward to it too! Seems we're having late winter for it's snowing again today!

Happy Valentine's Day to you all!

 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins

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