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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2000-04-14 10:05 PM


de Old knitted sweater

Adventures
just welcome as I was
in courage by a fiend to be gone this
journey never linking for a weak or so that it cold
get used this way it did too I’m so glad butt sad you there
yet your presents brings such relief to this aura vaginal draft
and purr puss of mist little chapter which was to leaf you
into a piece full come for table ground but if you no
thing like me you be tried of the same mold
contempt or airy voids that sneaks to
glory fly woke gather then tall
ants which draft tick
ally skewers art and graces
such in dived level souls with the
drudge airy of woke..! I can soy tan any
be leaf which is the truth of this fawn ally if own
lye manna festered threw a single palm or many foams
thy music your peach the very mass sagé of finessé
in appear ants and at tit lewd shod be in tart
con trash to ease kind of odor ease
very same will not rest pond
to a poets rule of dumb
which pears to be just act
ally what they lethal ridge ally
cordon wit newt protest or sin sure
as a mark of ally ants in this fare fate of
finessé... so if I woke at it yon enough
will fat make it add mire able odor
I weight for the voids to rule
ball looming nocturne
ally true in neat..?
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[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 04-18-2000).]

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INclan
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since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024
Indiana, USA
1 posted 2000-04-15 02:37 PM


Nice one, Lucky,  Did your mother read this birthday card?

Inclan

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2 posted 2000-04-15 02:42 PM


Lucky~
Awwwwwwww !
You've touched this little heart
with this one too.

I wrap myself in my mother's
robes at night and pull her memories
close to me.  I wonder if she knows
she still cradles me in her memories.
I hope so.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
3 posted 2000-04-15 03:14 PM


INclan,

You've caught me off guard. I would have to say yes if she can see from the great beyond then she probably saw me write every word.

Marge,

I'm sure she does, and I too am glad to hold a little part of your wonderful heart. So what else you got up that poetic sleeve of yours.

Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
4 posted 2000-04-15 04:10 PM


lucky, what a beauiful treasured piece of knitted memory...that has brought me my own mother's memory tucked away to retrieve...thank you.

[This message has been edited by Martie (edited 04-15-2000).]

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