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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
In a Sea of Love wanting to drown embracing arms not easily found inner feelings needing to share with willing heart always there emotions swirling in a raging pool seeking release from heart so full one to trust roll the dice takin a chance or thinkin twice a scary journey lovers quest freeing the heart from aching unrest is it a dream? lover and a friend quench this thirst found deep within so dream i shall for eventual day when love comes calling and decides to stay ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Danny~ the title got me in fast~ this is wonderful. I love the way you presented it!  - SEA |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Reach for those dreams, Danny, they'll come true! Very much enjoyed the formatting you used, well done.May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Ohhh...how very nice! Like the format, too! Marie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Danny, Good style, good words, good thoughts, good poem. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful poem, Danny! Very lovely! Denise |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I see you love to dream as I do sir...although we both tremble as we dream. My tip-toes are my best friends.  This is a beautiful poem, but of course, you know that, I'm sure! I love it! *trembling and dreaming* with you! -poetFemme |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
VERY nice danny-boy... your such a poetic romantic... but then what else could I expect from my BEH?? perfect poem Danny...*S* why its so good...you got Gen's tippy toes curling and she's trembling...LOL take care, BEG Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Danny this was fabulous...I like how the words llok like waves of the ocean...and the poetry as well "Love is not love, till you give it away" mianna86@yahoo.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Danny, I loved this one!! So sweet and romantic. Excellent layout and feelings from your heart. Love those waves!!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Well done, Danny...loved the form! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Danny~ First-Class .. all the way ! You just get better and better, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I have to agree with everyone Danny, you have found your way with words sweetie...this was beautiful in wanting and in dream!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Danny, This is beautiful the first stanza is so true its hard to find that special someone to drown in love with. Thanks for sharing, Cerenity |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Danny...this is wonderful!!! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Simply Beautiful in format and words ... Love this , I do ...... "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind." Maxwell Maltz |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is beautiful Danny!!! Written with hope, beauty, style, grace and the inner beauty of a man with a wonderful heart. I loved every line and the format was wonderful. Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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gemini shadow Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 70the mystic |
very beautiful and romantic poem Danny i loved the wave format made me feel like i was on the beach with you watching the tide roll in and out the waves crashing. like a cruise on the love boat gemini I want to be the face you see when you close your eyes I want to be the touch you need every single night I want to be your fantasy And be your reality And everything between I want you to need me, like I need you. celine dion |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
This gives you something to think about. It's very beautiful. Hope I never wake from this dream. Excellent job Danny!! |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Many thanks to all who so kindly responded to this poem. I very much appreciate each of you taking the time to read and comment. Happy Easter to one and all [This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 04-17-2000).] |
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