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The Rhythms of Love
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The Rhythms of Love |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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The Rhythms of Love Undertows of ocean’s tide Bring me nearer to your side Throbbing heart and quivering breast In want to soothe the soul’s unrest Melting into love’s first touch Drawing close toward lover’s clutch Warm and tingling sense of skin Build up rushing waves within Drumming beats within my ear Giving birth to blissful tear Synchronized in rhythm’s mesh The pulsing throb of wrapping flesh Wettened lips and fingertips Are visions of the eye’s eclipse And taste buds reap the pupil’s sight Of silken warmth of skin’s delight Tempos of a thunderous roar Oozing out of every pour Pounding heavy in the room Rock the earth in love’s consume Drum rolls fluttering through the mind Tremors sound in murmur’s time Slowing to a weakened state Of heart’s contentment in elate At dawn in early shadows' depth The rhythm sweet of silent breath Enveloped in lover’s steep Softly cradles me to sleep Elizabeth Santos |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful rhythms, Elizabeth!! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, At dawn in early shadows' depth The rhythm sweet of silent breath Envelops me in lover’s steep But I do not in cradle sleep. For I in churn and torment yearn, In depths of distance and concern. Seek your touch in small reprieve And dash upon the misconceive. Love Sy Your poems are to wonderful for words. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Well. now you've done it , Ms. I'm Too Sexy! ... Hey, will someone, pleae, turn down the air in here .... LOL Seriously Liz, this is a beautiful piece, that I loved reading .... [This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 04-12-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz, this is very beautiful, as always. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
You poetry is always so beautifully written. The title is so apropos, for indeed the rhythm of the piece is perfect. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Of silken warmth of skin's delight". Enjoyed this very much. James |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful indeed!! Elizabeth (as always)  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Absolutely wonderful |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
 Jeffrey |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
ack...didn't mean to post it twice Jeffrey [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 04-13-2000).] |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
You write so beautifully. Your flow and ryhme scheme was perfect. Marina |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Fantastic ...umm if i read it again though it`s cold shower time |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Liz, WOW Liz this is beautiful, love what a splended thing. Cerenity |
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