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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704
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I am almost of a breaking of a rise in temperature I am of these so closely I am held back reined by convention caught but how I could see myself in the cold waves bare bodied and swum through with you You may not know how I see you how my eyes pick out the lights in yours and the crush of your smile how it is not Beauty as the catwalk would covet but the softest purity of trust oh and how you collapse me and how I am bled of all safe lies around me I am empty and you a tide to rush me Me, the woman inside you throw love to her I’m unable to catch it show me |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My god, girl ! This is BEAUTIFUL ! You have such a gifted talent. I wanted to pick out a favorite line ... but each of them holds their own beauty. Together ... this is a complete beauty. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Marge(y) - thanks for the great big smile I have right now... ~blush~  Hugs The butterfly... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
My dear friend, I love the words you use to express yourself and the talent that you possess. Every line is beautiful! and this...... how it is not Beauty as the catwalk would covet but the softest purity of trust how very important trust is A very beautifully written piece! *hugs* What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kamla, You never cease to amaze me with your talent to express... "oh and how you collapse me and how I am bled of all safe lies around me I am empty and you a tide to rush me" Just Wonderful! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Breathtakingly beautiful ... how your soul speaks to us all, Little Butterfly ..... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh I just had to come back and read this beauty again.  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A swirling of emotion this is. Beautiful work, Kamla. "show me" - Indeed. Michael |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh Kamla...you are the queen of free verse  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Severn! Very nice! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Severn, I must agree with all the above. Wonderful work. *L* |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
sigh how it is not Beauty as the catwalk would covet but the softest purity of trust "the softest purity of trust" echoes through my mind beautiful Kamla dear beautiful! Mmy |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
sighhh |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
One finds the most beautiful things on these back roads... Love this your ladyship JThere is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...I understand |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was great - no wonder I miss seeing your posts. |
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