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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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someone please help me i just hurt the one i love a very special angel sent from heaven above i never meant to take advantage of her loving heart and it's killing me inside that i'm tearing us apart looking through this waterfall of tears upon my face i know that i shall never again feel her soft embrace i will never again feel her touch i know she is gone and i am left here in the dark crying all alone i know it's all my fault i should've been honest from the start then maybe i wouldn't be lying here with this broken heart won't someone please tell me that i will be ok? that i will live to love again that i will find a way *************************************************** darling if you happen to see this just know that i am truly sorry that i caused you so much pain i will love you always Jeffrey |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very beautiful and impassioned plea. very. your heart wrote this one... that is for sure keep writing it out...helps work it out... helps the heart to heal, take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey~ This is a sincere pouring from your heart ... I hope she understands your plea. When we hurt someone and it causes us this much pain ... we know that they are suffering too. Give yourself some time. It will heal, but only after you rid yourself of the guilt you carry. Peace to you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You know Jeffrey you made me think about how desperately some of us want someone to love and in our heart we would like to give them the world and then when we finally find ourselves in a loving relationship somehow we fail and we don't live up to our hopes and expectations or theirs....and I don't believe that we destroy a relationship by only one mistake..I think it is an accumulation of mistakes over a long period of time...so it seems to me that you are truly sorry and you have the right attitude and a soft heart...so I hope that she will forgive you and give you another chance...I think we would all like to believe that the one we love would give us another chance..and someday she will probably need another chance from you. James |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thank you FRIENDS your kindness is very appreciated. I know your words are true and I will certainly go on with my life with or without my love. Please forgive me for throwing my problems on you. Jeffrey |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very touching poem, Jeffrey. If things don't work out with her, the lessons you have learned will be valuable in the next relationship. We are wise if we learn from our mistakes. Again, great poem! Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I think my friends before me gave you some good advice .... this piece is heartfelt and sincere ... Have you shown this to her? [This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 04-11-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Ah, never be sorry for putting what you feel in verse. If anything these are the most caring, loving, sharing people to do with it. It will get better, I hope too that she can forgive you! Written from the heart, and what a heart it is. Did ya try giving this to her? <*\\\>< YOUR LIFE IS NOT A COINCIDENCE. IT'S A REFLECTION OF YOU! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
This is a beautifully written poem sir...I'm sure your angel will love it. If she doesn't come back to you with forgiveness, I'd say she's close to crazy! (just my opinion of course!)  |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I wish I knew how to help you Jeffrey. I do not know the situation therefore can not give decent advice. Trust is a very fragile thing and sometimes not easily healed. The best advice I can give is this, be honest, speak from your heart and always remember you as well as she are human and make mistakes. Stand strong in yourself and no matter what the outcome is, life does move forward. There are always brighter skies on the horizon. |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Jeffrey, Don't ever think that you are "throwing your problems our way"! That is what friends are for... for listening and comforting, and for ttaking the time to help you work things out. Just let us know anytime you need someone to talk to....we will be here for you! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
To all of you again thank you for your kindness. It is rare to find a group of strangers that become instant friends, but that is what I have found in passions. P.S. She did return . We are going to try to work things out. Much love to all my new family. Jeffrey |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jeffrey~ this brought on the tears, then I read she came back!! I'm so glad for you. I hope it all works out!  -SEA |
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Ella Junior Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 20 |
Jeff, I have just learnt how to use this poetry page and your poem was the first that i read. It was so beautiful and touching i want to read more of your work and i know that i will. If the lady you were writing to did not see this poem maybe you should show her or tell her how you feel. You express yourself beautifully and eloquently. You made my heart patter. Ella |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thank you Ella , she did return thanks for the kind words Jeffrey |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Jeffery...I'm glad she returned...hopefully you learned that honesty is always the best policy....there are no tracks to cover when you're honest from the start |
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