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A Diner's Delima
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A Diner's Delima |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas 
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Well, clear off the table For I don't think I am able Put me on the table top With a leaden little plop The food was rich and sweet But I should've been more wise For on the third course of meat Is where I met my demise Well, I stopped when I knew That my face was turning blue But by then it was too late Face first I fell in my plate Rising from their plates Other diners checked my eyes But it was far too late For I had met my demise So bathe my cold, hard skin Shave the whiskers from my chin Dress me in my favorite kilt Place me in a box well built As the worms and beetles feed On my skin and on my eyes I truly hope that I will be Like me their own demise Alicat, the Persnikitty As I sit here dimly thinking Watching modem lights a-blinking Churning out poetic hash. Lord, in all Your piety, Help me keep my sanity: Please don't let the modem crash! --Alicat |
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Alias Junior Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 30 |
shouldn't eat so much. nice poem  gave me a few laughs and made me think... good stuff... keep it up,Alias |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Persnikitty..... will there ever be a day when I know what to expect opening one of your posts??? This one's quite entertaining.....   |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
I think maybe I'll skip breakfast this morning.  "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Alicat, well I was hungry..........  this is good!-SEA |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
It figures for the first time in ages, I would have had to eat breakfast today. haha Ali, what a mix of laughter and a bit of ewwww! haha Enjoyed this one! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
No wonder I dont eat LoL......great poem though, thanks for the laugh and stoamch turning and nevermind... Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Cute poem you have here, although it turned my stomach just a bit. Well, turning my stomach isn't difficult to do. LOL! Laters Kitty! |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Uh..sorry guys. *Shrug* But I guess a wonderous lesson has been learned....never put your computer on the kitchen table, and never eat at your computer.  Alicat, the Persnikitty |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
LOL, great poem Alicat I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Number 3 ! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Cute one! It seems Munda is on a mission to pull that light of your from under the bushel basket! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very entertaining, Ali!  Denise |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
hehe. Missed this one....I must have been having breakfast! Good one, 'cat. |
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