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Cerenity
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0 posted 2000-04-07 09:54 AM



Praising Mother Nature


I laud you oh mother
for you are the teacher
decreeing my existence
I trod on your holy
surface with light
footed steps.

I laud you oh mother
bountiful your design
precious are your traits
you so freely give me
that in which I need
to destroy would be
a act of true
vengeance.

I laud you  oh mother
loves melodies you designed
effortlessly you capture the
heart with awe and with
rapture of life your
goal.

I laud you  oh mother
my soul delights at your sight,
and my imperfect design
needy of your capacities I
shall swear to you my
breaths force to not
take in vain your
stability.

I laud you oh mother
I give  my offspring your
teachings and laws. I
pray they too see your
enlightenment and
you show thier souls
the way in which
to walk.

To you mother I sing
and give thanks for
you make my soul
complete.


By,  Cerenity  


  





[This message has been edited by Cerenity-1 (edited 04-07-2000).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-04-07 11:00 AM


Beautiful sentiments, Cerenity! Very lovely!

Denise

Cerenity
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2 posted 2000-04-07 12:10 PM


Hi Denise,

Thank you so much for your reply and for helping me out with this poem.

Cerenity

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2000-04-07 02:57 PM


Cerenity,
Wonderful prayer, you should say this every morning when you get up.

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4 posted 2000-04-08 08:11 AM


Cerenity~
This is just lovely.
~*Marge*~


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Pepper
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5 posted 2000-04-08 10:56 AM


Beautiful ... simply beautiful,Cerenity.....

 "Shoot for the moon.Even if you miss,you'll land among the stars."
_Les Brown_

Cerenity
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6 posted 2000-04-08 11:21 AM


Hi  

Seymour  Marge  Pepper

I have learned when out in natures relm I can quiet my mind and really think, and get answers that I need. Plus the fact that I am a flower freck and can't get enough of them.

Thank you so much for your kind words,

Cerenity

Martie
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7 posted 2000-04-08 12:12 PM


Beautiful poem Cerenity!
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