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brandondinsmore
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since 1999-10-27
Posts 142
OKC, OK

0 posted 2000-04-05 05:54 PM


Time

Time is on my side
Yes, time is on my side
The days I like drift slowly enough
For the days I hate to pass by
Cherished days and wretched days
Are what makes up my time.

10/26/99


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Dawn Eclipse
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula
1 posted 2000-04-05 07:24 PM


Wonderful piece.  There are so many ways to express time, and yours was great!  

 Sometimes the most important things can't be seen with the eyes, but are rather felt with the heart.
*Cassie Roseen*



CherylLynnMckee
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 215

2 posted 2000-04-05 07:33 PM


so true...great job!

 

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
3 posted 2000-04-05 07:57 PM


Truer words were never spoken.  Great work!!

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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