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Trying to move on
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Trying to move on |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697
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I’m trying to move on I picked up the shattered remains Of my heart and soul And I’m trying to move on But it’s hard to walk ahead When you can do nothing But look back Back to the man who rejected you And find that, after all this You still love him If only I had another love A love that I could look ahead to Instead of looking back to A love that isn’t the child of dreams But a beautiful reality I am waiting for you, my love I’m trying to move on Take me away from my broken self Take me away from my hopeless love And help me get together And move on "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
How sad, Lovebug. Sorry things didn't work out for you!  Hope things are looking up for you SOON! Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Nice writing. Its tough to move on, but its something we have to do, just face another day and the beauty that it can bring. Sometimes a new start is what we need the most. Good effort LoveBug |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
"The journaey of a thousand miles begins with a single step"~Tao too bad that first step is often the hardest...((((HUGS)))) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I agree with Hoot, about taking the first step. And another thing, just between you and me, this will not be the last love of your life. There is someone out there that is dying to meet you and will love you with all his heart. You just haven't met him yet. But you will in time. In the meantime, you've got lots of hugs here to keep you warm. Love ya Liz |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Thank you all for your support!  "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sad and beautiful poem, LoveBug. Well done! Denise |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Actually you are moving on by writing this lovely, sad poem (look and you'll see). |
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