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vandana
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0 posted 2000-04-04 06:18 PM



I'm broke ,
Don't know what to do
with my life,
I've lost her in everyway,
wish I could tell her
that I do care for her,
And love her so much,
Hope she'll come into my life,
Once again ,
hold me tight,
let the days go by,
And the love should go on,
The things we have said and done,
we can work it out,
I'm broke
and and helplesly in love,
wanted her so much
in my life,
Tell her
how much I love her,
I wanted her
to know
there's a chance for us,
Once again,
wanted her back
in my arms,
Don't know,
If she still cares for me,
And  if she wants to come back
in my heart,
Once again,
We'll be happy after again,
Once again,

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Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

1 posted 2000-04-04 06:25 PM


Nice writing Vandana...  enjoyed the poem.
Denise
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2 posted 2000-04-04 10:28 PM


I enjoyed this, Vandana!  

Denise

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