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Open Poetry #6

The Stuff of Beauty

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-04-04 10:51 AM

Such is the stuff of beauty
That repairs the tear in my soul
And puts me together
Pieces become whole
Through the stormy weather

I am in need of consolation
Restless yet forever in debt
Because of the desolation
And the sun making me wet

Such is the stuff of beauty
That is a twin within my heart
And I question why,
Why I always fall just short
In your red and watery eye

I am in need of adulation
For I’ve come to find
That true love has no stipulation
When you’re of the same mind

That is more cherished by me
Such is the stuff of beauty

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

1 posted 2000-04-04 11:01 AM

Hi JML,

WOW

I love the beauty in your words.

Cerenity

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-04-04 11:07 AM

Such is the stuff of beauty
That is a twin within my heart
And I question why,
Why I always fall just short
In your red and watery eye

I am in need of adulation
For I’ve come to find
That true love has no stipulation
When you’re of the same mind

That is more cherished by me
Such is the stuff of beauty

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there is much beauty in these words to cherish...
and I do, I do... cherish you and your poems

perfect poem jer,
stalking you always,
your jm

...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces,
you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination...
then you turned and smiled in my direction...
and my heart...gave me away.
glass tiger

Corazon
Senior Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 1209

3 posted 2000-04-04 11:10 AM

like this, like the way you put your questions and tears and heartaches and heart bonding all together....that's what a relationship is...when two hearts are one...good job

gemini shadow
Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 70
the mystic

4 posted 2000-04-04 10:29 PM

That is a twin within my heart
And I question why,

perfect words.
gemini

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 2000-04-05 12:22 PM

Beautiful words

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