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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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Dear Lilac < !signature-->Early in the morning around stillness of frozen dawn when snow flakes well come as I was in courage by a fiend to be gone this journey never linking for a weak or so that it cold get used this way it did too I’m so glad butt sad you there yet your presents brings such relief to this aura vaginal draft and purr puss of mist little chapter which was to leaf you into a piece full come for table ground but if you no thing like me you be tried of the same mold contempt or airy voids that sneaks to glory fly woke gather then tall ants which draft tick ally skewers art and graces such in dived level souls with the drudge airy of woke..! I can soy tan any be leaf which is the truth of this fawn ally if own lye manna festered threw a single palm or many foams thy music your peach the very mass sagé of finessé in appear ants and at tit lewd shod be in tart con trash to ease kind of odor ease very same will not rest pond to a poets rule of dumb which pears to be just act ally what they lethal ridge ally cordon wit newt protest or sin sure as a mark of ally ants in this fare fate of finessé... so if I woke at it yon enough will fat make it add mire able odor I weight for the voids to rule ball looming nocturne ally true in neat..? [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 04-18-2000).] |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is a very beautiful poem as the imagery and descriptions is magnificent! Nathan |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ Just WOW ! My stars this is gorgeous ! A 'keeper' for sure !  Can you hear my *sighs* ? Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Methinks this is beautiful--and I love lilacs. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A beautiful poem, this is a gem. I agree completely with Marge. The presentation is beautiful to the eye as well. Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, darling heart, how I see through your tender words, to our own story until tears stand in my eyes, and love grows deeper in my heart. How I love you! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Wow! Fabulous writing style. Very different and provacative. I like the free flow feeling of it, like stream of consciousness writing techniques. Look forward to seeing more! Corinne |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
lucky- the presentation and form of this were just enough in themselves to make me say wow..combine that with the flow and the beautiful imagery and messages, and can we say POWERFUL! from one writer to another, excellent!! take care, Amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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winterinblue Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 32 |
Oh, I love this poem! What pictures! What feelings! |
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