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love with honour can hold no regrets
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love with honour can hold no regrets |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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Wanting to end this silence < !signature-->I talked with you my friends and as the Stars gathered round I began the story with no end Halfway through my tale Mr Moon shone down at my side told me he was listening to think of him as my guide Slowly the hours went by little stars yawned in sleep but the moon kept on shining he said he was earning his keep The magic in my eyes said it all myriads of flickering lights and when I looked around again my world seemed incredibly bright The chill that had been with me was replaced with something new as the voice of the youngest star spoke up astonished at his debut "if the rain stopped trying to cry and the sun forgot to dry his tears our lights could never follow you and guide you through the years" As Rainbow and Stars quietly listened Mr Moon shone with his wisdom and said "Live life with all of your heart love with honour can hold no regrets we'll always light the way ahead however dark your life may seem to get" and so I travel on my new road... Love you all HUGS Ouvrir mon coeur et âme [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 02-11-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RG~ you are so talented....I loved this! How inspiring!  -SEA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful, RG!!! May whatever road you travel be lit with your smiles... may you never lack the company and comfort of friends... may every day's end find you dreaming peacefully... and every morning find you eager for another day! |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
May the stars at night Be your guiding light May the toughts you keep Be in your heart so deep Your poem so nice it's done May Mr Moon Shine bring you the one Thank you Rainbow The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautifully said, Rainbow.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RainbowGirl- You have been touched by a magical muse in this one, dear. As pretty as I've ever read. That old moon is still such an inspiration, isn't it? Doesn't hurt to have it adorned with stars and a little rainbow sprinkled with a raindrop. May your road be 'yellow-bricked'. LOL ! at Balladeer's 'grinning like a Cheshire Cat' smiley ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You've set this one well m'dear...with the moon, the stars, the rain... Glad to see things looking up for you...keep the smiles in your pocket for the journey along that road!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Just keep on smiling, RG...  |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
RG your talent never ceases to amaze me. Your beauty shines inside and out. Very inspiring piece. |
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cjs9853 Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 44smyrna, tn usa. |
Beautiful  .So inspiring,May this new road bring you love,peace and happiness.I miss not talking to you everyday. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely! I like the image of those little stars getting sleepy! May every journey you take end at the rainbow of your dreams...  |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
beautiful rainbow, and I hope each footstep brings you smiles |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very wise words my friend |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ah, Rainbow, this is so beautiful! Very lovely! Denise |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Bless you for all your comments, means a lot to me... HUGS Ouvrir mon coeur et âme |
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