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Midnight Blue (don't be afraid to read me i'm a serious wayoutwalt poem) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Suspended in my lungs the last breath I held for you You came to me in vision when the heat was all too much I missed your very presence until I lost your touch Now my heart hangs heavy-laden in the western sky My sight is never ending the many passers by None wear the rose in their hair plucked as my love has been Placed in the midnight sky to inspire poetic men No one looks except a few who hold their pad and pen No one dares or even cares to see the heart of men So how will I a cursed wretch find you in the throng Will you be the one, rose in hair, singing lover’s song [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 03-25-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Walt! First you write about PMS, then you sneak in her with this wonderful poem! This is one of your best sir! Absolutely magnificent!!!  |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
This is so true, people neglect the hearts of men and expect them to be "manly" and hide thier feelings and keep a straght face all the time and speak in low boring tones of foolish striving for masculine perfection. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Walt you can do anything! Magnificent it is! I always say a real man shows his emotions. After all they're God given! |
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Jenna Barkley Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 16 |
Walt-Wonderfully said my friend! This just goes to show what talent one has. I say this as I am printing this amazing poem out! I am very impressed! ~Jen |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I saw a poetic masterpiece written by a man named Walt the ink flowed from his pen as the words danced around and formed a waltz of a poem Excellent job Walt, I love it. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank yuh all hehehe waltz waltz waltz losty....yuh i wrote this with a PILOT G-2 .07 fine ball point ink and a very fine ink it was yuh... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sometimes I think we should redub thee.... You can still be wow though.. How about... wiseolewalt? |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I am not afraid to read it--and I found it to be pretty good! Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
heh, excellent work there walt  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I see in the heart of men...yours, beautiful, spreading these words through here from your serious side. I like this very much. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Walt! Denise |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
whew thanx the rest o yuh for replyin yuh are all so kind |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This was good Walt...bought time you gave up writing about pms- this seems to fit you much better!! (and you don't get smacked so much I'm sure) Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
They usually find you when you stop looking for them I think, Walt. Even then, they're a bear to hold on to. This was beautiful, Walt. Personally - I love your P.M.S.stuff too, though ...LOL Michael [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 03-26-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
hehehe thanx mike and devina i'll keep writin the sillies as long as somebody likes em yuhuyuyuy |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Walt..I like your silly side as it makes me smile...but boy, you certainly shine when you cut to the chase with these serious ones |
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