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vandana
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0 posted 2000-03-25 11:47 AM



Your gentle touch,
You touched me,
You love me ,
And you say you're in love with me,
Because I was the one
to make you happy,
Your sweet smile makes crazy,
You love me all day
And when I'm alone,
I feel so lost,
When you're not here,
to touch you,
I feel empty,
And lost,
But you come to me,
you touch me and talk to me
with your loving voice,
Your gentle touch makes crazy,
you take my hand,
you say you love me,
your gentle touch
and when you whisper into my ears,
I feel so lost in love,
Sometimes I wonder
why you love me so much,
But you give me an answer
for the question I've
inside my heart,
Your gentle touch
Gentle Touch

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INclan
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1 posted 2000-03-25 11:58 AM


Ah, soft and sweet....VERY nice.

INclan

Denise
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2 posted 2000-03-25 12:07 PM


This is so sweet, Vandana! Very lovely!

Denise

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-03-25 01:24 PM


VanDana~
This is so sweet and lovely.
Seems things in Atlanta are good.
Alive with the ~Spring~ing of love in bloom.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Poet deVine
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4 posted 2000-03-25 07:10 PM


Ah..a gentle touch....very good.
VampDude
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5 posted 2000-03-25 08:50 PM


A gentle touch... one of the many great things that come with love.. VERY nice poem, vandana!

 "So close, no matter how far, couldn't be much more from the heart, forever trusting who we are, and nothing else matters"
-Metallica-

Windrider Silverbreeze
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6 posted 2000-03-25 08:59 PM




With the coming of spring,
Love blooms anew,
As the words are written,
And felt only by you.

May loves weet embrace,
Tender unto you all,
And keep you safe for the coming of Fall,
Springs love sends,
A new hope and praise,
One's we'll remember...

The rest of our days.

(Very well written and swseet poem.  Keep writting)


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