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Our Seasons |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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It is not with unmixed regret that I see my words departWell come as I was in courage by a fiend to be gone this journey never linking for a weak or so that it cold get used this way it did too I’m so glad butt sad you there yet your presents brings such relief to this aura vaginal draft and purr puss of mist little chapter which was to leaf you into a piece full come for table ground but if you no thing like me you be tried of the same mold contempt or airy voids that sneaks to glory fly woke gather then tall ants which draft tick ally skewers art and graces such in dived level souls with the drudge airy of woke..! I can soy tan any be leaf which is the truth of this fawn ally if own lye manna festered threw a single palm or many foams thy music your peach the very mass sagé of finessé in appear ants and at tit lewd shod be in tart con trash to ease kind of odor ease very same will not rest pond to a poets rule of dumb which pears to be just act ally what they lethal ridge ally cordon wit newt protest or sin sure as a mark of ally ants in this fare fate of finessé... so if I woke at it yon enough will fat make it add mire able odor I weight for the voids to rule ball looming nocturne ally true in neat..? [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 03-02-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky- Still one of the prettiest words in our language ... H O M E. It always calls my name, summoning me to its front porch swing, its gardens filled with fragrances of childhood. My favorite place to be ... H O M E. Of such wonderful thoughts and callings ... you have rendered a look at your seasons. Beautiful, my friend. Love ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
I am starting to see a pattern in the style of your work, it has a seasonal theme right ... 'well duh', I like the presentation . |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Marge, Are you the only poet with longfellow hours, LOL I got to tell you it's so funny watching some of these responces in the wee hour of morn. But I know yours are from the heart. I love you babba. That was a nice little piece ya did there for De... much love |
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kaleidoscope Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 38 |
This is very touching and dear. The images you tenderly display - the fireside, the coziness of home with the fierce winter outside... nice imagery! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dale, I have found you and the wonder of the poetry that is in you which I find so wonderfully intriguing and true and it just always seems to fill my heart. |
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