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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Buried Questions Does it hurt you so much- every time you walk away? Do you feel that heavy voice- that’s needing you to stay? Because if you go- you know- it’ll only break your heart? Do you feel that emptiness- as you storm across the floor? Do you want to take it back- with each step towards the door? Do you honestly know that after this- we’ll be the same no more? Do you take a mental picture- the last you’ll ever see? Do you memorize my face- so that you won’t forget me? Or do you blank out all the memories-finally making you free? Does it hurt to recall the words we shared through bitter voice? Does it anger you to know right then- that you had no choice? Do your cheeks burn with warm tears- new and still so moist? Does it sadden you to know the love you lost tonight? Do you honestly realize- that you didn’t choose me over pride? So many questions buried away with the part of me that’s died… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
devina, this pain is so much on the surface of you skin. It reminds me of how I felt once, and I wouldn't want that on anyone. I got my arms around my PC just for you. Just close your eyes and lean on my shoulder for a little. Parker |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Heart breaking. Bitterly familiar, especially the tears. Great job, ma'am. |
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Enola Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138England |
I'm a new member and your poem is the first I've read form this site and I couldn't have chosen a better one. I only hope you aren't experiencing the all too familiar pain you wrote about. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lovely feelings, Devina. 'Do you honestly know that after this- we’ll be the same no more?' Longingly your heart displays the sighs of love's changes. *H U G S* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
James...I'm glad I have you to lean on sweetie...I'm sure no one's shoulder can compare!!  GS- I'm glad to know I'm not the only one...thanks dear man !! Enola- Welcome to our family...be it joy or sorrow!!! The pain gets easier I know...but the memories never fade... Marge- you're hugs are the best dear!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Enola, we are waiting eagerly to here some of your poetry, I am sure it will be great . And you are right, this is a great poem that touches the heart and soul . |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
devina, I was told at an early age "If you don`t ask you`ll never know" and this made me think about just how true that is. But still there are so many buried question`s inside all of us,well atleast in me. Nice poem Devina Today is the first day of the rest of my life. |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
devina, another intensely sad poem from you, and yet I can't help but share every word. Keep smiling  ((HUGS)) |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautifully sad, Devina. Very well expressed feelings. I hope your rose blooms again soon, also. Michael |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
angelswing- thank you for the kind thoughts. Wizzard- there's much truth in that thought...if only I hadn't stopped and told him before...instead of after!!! jascanvey- *Smiling just for you * thanks for the hug...I needed that!!!Micheal- with spring coming, there's a good chance for both our roses to bloom...yours probably sooner than mine though! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Devina, you are always so deep in sad poetry I wonder how much deeper a love poem would be Your melting many hearts already And every time I go and read you seem to get wiser with the second Such lovely poem Big Hug Keep this up and you have me in tears The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
devina, the bitterness just overflowed with this piece. So sad, and so well expressed! Claire |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Stubborness has always been a companion of passion -- how we must endeavor to temper ourselves of the very thing that we could use to hold on through tough times -- if we were only as stubborn about being loved as we are about being right...hold on de... hold on... huggZzzzzzzzz |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Helmut- I didn't mean to give you tears dear friend!!!! I might get wiser through poetry...but my stubborn brain refuses to listen half the time!!! hehe Your concern warms my heart dear!!! Claire- thank you much!! LR- I'm trying m'friend...believe me...I think a return hug is in order here...huggggssss back atcha!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I had to wipe the tears away to type, after reading this...I could swear you people are spying on me. I feel like we are sisters now. I am hoping that this is fictional, but I've candle burning for you anyhow. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You're so sweet!!! And I thank you from the bottom of my heart...We are now linked through passions...a very strong bond indeed!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Devina, what a sad poem with thought provoking questions. Excellently written. Hugs to you in hopes that you feel better. |
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