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The Image
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The Image |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
The Image A mirror seeks confession From a hushed soul A dilemma, perhaps depression For whom the bells will toll Envy, the evil of intent In jealousy the devil dance’s to joy A war rages when one is never content But whom does it destroy? The mirror does reveal What a heart may feel And time can never steal If the image is true and real Marina Mar. 1/2000 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Envy, the evil of intent In jealousy the devil dance’s to joy A war rages when one is never content But whom does it destroy? ------------- oooh marina, i love this cryptic poem of dark ponderings...very good take care, jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Very haunting in it's implications ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is!... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Janet Marie and Childomine, thank you Marina |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is always the last person that you ask and always the hardest one to listen to. Very well done. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Not to be funny Marina. . .but this is very *ahem* "Reflective". . . And it shows me a whole other side of you. . . I like it. . .it's always hardest to ask those of the person in the mirror. . . Wonderful, my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Butterflie, thank you very much and you are exactly right. I am so glad someone could interperate it so perfectly! Sven, it would appear to me that you are shocked at all the sides of me! What did you think I was just a pretty face!!! Marina |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Janet Marie, as long as were being truthful...what's the deal now girl? Marina |
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MyPenNameIsSam Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 94usa |
so true...and a wonderful poem too -molly aka sam Fleeting World "Thus shall ye think of all this fleeting world: A star at dawn, a bubble in a stream; A flash of lightning in a summer cloud, A flickering lamp, a phantom, and a dream." -from the Diamond Sutra, translated by : A. F. Price -- found in Teachings of The Buddha, edited by Jack Kornfield |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Thank you Molly! Marina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
No Marina, I know that you're more than just a pretty face. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marina~ Nice glance into the looking glass. This is pondering material. I ponder. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sven, you just remember that! Marge, thank you very much. Marina |
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