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Nan
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0 posted 2000-03-17 04:40 PM



Everything is somewhere;
There is no empty space.
Everywhere there's something,
And each thing's got a place.

Nothing's ever nowhere,
Or found without a spot.
There's no place with nothing;
An empty space there's not.

Things will always be there.
Though it may seem quite clear,
Air's made up of something.
What is the matter here?

Some things are found elsewhere,
Or sometimes side by side.
Many things keep moving;
Let's hope they don't collide!!







[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 03-18-2000).]

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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2000-03-17 04:45 PM


yuh like earth and mars see i saw this movie once and... nice poem thur nan!
Danny Holloway
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2 posted 2000-03-17 04:50 PM


yes, but I still cannot find my keys!
I like your creative mind in this poem.
Nice work.

Poeminister
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3 posted 2000-03-17 05:04 PM


"Air's made up of something.
What is the matter here?"

Nan, This is wonderful poem.  It's even scientific, in a poetic way... Sometimes I believe theres a certain nothingness that is the capacity wherin all eveythingness exists, but then I think..take out everythingness, nothingness must still be somethingness of some sort so perhaps there is no such thing as absolute nothingness..that all things are matter.  Don't know if I make sense..anyway...
Happy St. Patricks day.  I liked that little leperchaun graphic.

from Poeminister
  




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Corinne
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4 posted 2000-03-17 05:38 PM



Nan, you are very creative and inventive, my dear!

Cor

Nan
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5 posted 2000-03-17 05:58 PM


wayout - Are you still watchin' those movies?? You know what I told you about that - They warp your brain!!...    

Danny - Thanks... um.. Your keys are somewhere - Just like everything else..    

Poeminister - If you're gonna play this game, you have to get your Ness's right.. It's like this..  
  
quote:
"a certain NothingNess that is the capacity wherin all EverythingNess exists, but then I think..take out EverythingNess, NothingNess must still be SomethingNess of some sort so perhaps there is no such thing as absolute NothingNess...."

This all makes PERFECT SENSE to me..
........ Sincerely, Nancy Ness.....    


Corinne - Takes one to know one...    

Thanks everyone..    





[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 03-18-2000).]

Martie
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6 posted 2000-03-17 06:11 PM


I have nothing to say...er..or was that everything...I am so confused.

Enjoyed your poem Nan

Meadowmuse
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7 posted 2000-03-17 06:39 PM


FunnyNESS, Nan!  

~ claire


Denise
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8 posted 2000-03-17 08:51 PM


This is cute, Nan!  

Denise

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9 posted 2000-03-17 09:10 PM


Nan: Thank heavens my brain knows it resides inside my head cause otherwise I'd never remember where it was...LOL...Now all I have to do is remember where I put my head..*g*

HUSG

 I love the way I look in your eyes, I'm just me tho'...
We are all works in progress, no?


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10 posted 2000-03-17 09:39 PM


NaniNESS~
What a cute, cute poem.

A great sense of humor
seen coming out of you.
When nothing is the order ...
NothingNESS will do.

~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 2000-03-17 09:53 PM


Ah ha, Nan this was good, twisted my brain a bit, but was good.  haha
Dr.Moose1
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12 posted 2000-03-17 10:25 PM


To post with the most
We all count on Nan
No leprechauns could
In a thousand life-spans

Balladeer
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13 posted 2000-03-17 11:12 PM


Nan,  what a Ness you are!! I never underNESStimate you!
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14 posted 2000-03-17 11:57 PM



Nan
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15 posted 2000-03-18 12:53 PM


This was really fun to write...  

Martie - YOU think YOU're confused???

Claire - A bit of SilliNess in each day, I say..

Denise - Just keep on writing those good Sea-faring tales...

RG - Brain farts, you say??

Marge - I kept trying to find a line where I could put "AnythingNess", and the meter just didn't work...

WhtDove - Like a pretzel here..

Moose - What leprechaun?

Deer - Not Nessessary....

Severn - I understand completely

          

Merci, all....

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2000-03-18 05:16 PM


Nan,
And when they do collide,
It becomes the new untried.
Love the way you write. Sy

Cheshire Grin
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17 posted 2000-03-19 11:59 AM


Oh NannerNess, what a mess
My nothingNess did compress
A somethingNess...but I digress

What silliNess conjured this?
A somethingNess from nothingNess?
Oh NannerNess, pray confess

Was it meaNess that did compress
The somethingNess to nothingNess?
Or was it too hard to digest?

My orbs are blessed, like the rest
From the rhymes of a Miss Ness
Written with such PurrrrrrfectNess




 The cat grins.
Slowly the grin vanishes
Until only the cat remains.
DOH!


hoot_owl_rn
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18 posted 2000-03-19 08:56 PM


LOL...yes, it's usually in the last place I look too  
Michael
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19 posted 2000-03-21 07:22 AM


Everything is spinning!!!

I think it's just way too early or way too late for me to try to make heads or tales of this right now.  Good poem, teach...


Michael

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