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~It's not love~
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~It's not love~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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It hurts you because you think it's love But I know you know you've had enough Enough of his lies and the pain Your heart can no longer take the strain Lay that beast to rest I say And live to love another day One day your true love will appear And in your heart be forever dear Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Good advice, sweetie. Hard for some to take at times, huh? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi tracie, WOW, There is so much truth in your words, the laying to rest part is so very hard to do thought. Thank you, Cerenity |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This is short and sweet! but sad, I know the feeling...when it isn't love!  "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear all These words were written for Shunshine in teen poetry, she has been having a rough time for a little while now and I've been looking after her you might say. Some of this may seem a little harsh but I know the progress for which she has been transending through. I thought that now was an appropriate time to say "Hey sweetie you need to try to move on" I know it's terribly hard especially for a teenager to try to push through a one way romance and I hope she does. LoL tracie Thanks for your reply's Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~tracie I really liked this a lot! Some wonderful words of wisdom and advice you have bestowed onto this friend of yours! She is lucky to have you. Great poem! Amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Ravenlearns2fly Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 71 |
Your poem was great! Sometimes we over look the love of a teen, as being not real. In truth Love at any age is always painfull it is but a lesson in life each must learn. Raven |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Amy Thanks for reading sweetie and for your lovely words LoL tracie By the way I have a daughter named Amy, it's a lovely name I was originally going to spell it aimey but opted for the easiest way to spell it. Bye< !signature--> Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 03-17-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Raven thanks for reading yes those teenage years are so tough emotionally and it all takes time. LoL Tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
"Lay the beast to rest I say And live to love another day" What a wonderful phrase and good sound advice. I love it. Liz |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
thanks Liz I like those two lines as well LoL tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Tracie, very wise advice and a lot said in just a few words |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Tracie: Good advice.. HUGS I love the way I look in your eyes, I'm just me tho'... We are all works in progress, no? |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
To Hoot and R.G Thanks for your great comments, much appreciated. Tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***tracie66, I love this poem, so much said in a relatively short piece. Beautiful. Sunshine is lucky to have you..... I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Some very good advice for many of us. James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
M.T & James Thanks for your replies I'm greatful to have her as a friend, we have become great e-mail buddies and it's great. I must take this chance to say though that she e-mailed me today and say's that she doesn't bother posting her poetry much now because noone replies, maybe a few more of us can visit the teen poetry forum. tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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