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maureen
Junior Member
since 2000-03-16
Posts 11
US

0 posted 2000-03-16 12:02 PM


To My Husband

You are the one that I love
The one that has been sent from above
You have melted my soul
You make me loose control
You see to my every desire
You set my soul on fire
My love for you goes ever so deep
For always it will be yours to keep
The clouded feelings are starting to clear
Soon we will begin a brand new year
Five years longer than a decade
It is amazing the strides we have made
In good times or bad
Oh, the times we have had
We were always here
Wanting to calm each others fear
You are my day
You are my night
Loving you is so very right
Your love is a wonderful treasure
To give you my love is my pleasure.

by Maureen
  
this was written for my husband of almost 15 years. For you my love.


© Copyright 2000 Maureen Davis - All Rights Reserved
Honeybee
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
1 posted 2000-03-16 02:09 PM


Maureen, this is beautiful and very touching.  I am sure that your husband will love this poem!

take care,
Melissa Honeybee  

Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
2 posted 2000-03-16 03:10 PM


~Maureen...

This was very sweet and beautiful! Made me cry a little, but a happy cry. Sorry I'm kinda emotional today. Great poem though, truly enjoyed reading it.

Welcome to Passions! This is a wonderful place filled with many loving people.

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

ken
Junior Member
since 2000-03-10
Posts 49
RI
3 posted 2000-03-16 07:06 PM


Thank you very much. I do indeed love this poem. I am honored to be your husband.


ken

Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2000-03-16 07:26 PM


Oh, this is sweet! I'm so happy to see you both here! Welcome to "our" family! Check your email!  
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-03-17 08:07 PM


This is beautiful, Maureen! Welcome to Passions!

Denise

INclan
Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024
Indiana, USA
6 posted 2000-03-17 09:04 PM


How refreshing to see a love still alive after 15 years.  May you see another 15 and 15 more beyond that!

INclan

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
7 posted 2000-03-17 09:20 PM


Very touching.....I feel the same way about mine.  He is very lucky indeed!!!!
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
8 posted 2000-03-17 10:04 PM


WELCOME! This is really great to see such love! May you have many, many more years of it!

I just saw your husbands post in spirtual! That was a good'n too  

 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins

maureen
Junior Member
since 2000-03-16
Posts 11
US
9 posted 2000-03-18 12:05 PM


I would like to thank all of you for your comments. It is easy to right about something that means so much to me. Thanks again to all of you.

Ken, I love you always!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
10 posted 2000-03-19 03:40 AM


"To give you my Love is my Pleasure" these are such lovely words that every husband would love to hear.  Beautiful poetry.  James
A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
11 posted 2000-03-19 05:59 AM


Beautiful tirbute!   WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
12 posted 2000-03-19 09:17 PM


What a beautiful tribute to lasting love. Welcome to passions  
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