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Breathe~
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0 posted 2000-02-10 02:25 PM


Her eyes light upon her love
shining beauty of a new born star
The signs of their passion still evident
in her tossled hair and flushed cheeks
secret smiles playing
upon her sweetly sated lips...

Evening memories
play over and over
scenes of vivid erotica
evidence still fresh upon
her ravished body...

Pressing against him
his warmth an intoxicating comfort
as she trails fingers in soft chest curls
breathing him in
with kisses of awakening
shivering delights
at the aroma of him
upon her flesh...



 Freedom of expression is the watch word...

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Beki
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1 posted 2000-02-10 02:33 PM


This whole poem is wonderfully intoxicating!
Breathe~
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2 posted 2000-02-10 04:24 PM


Thank you Beki!

It was a wonderfully intoxicating time...*grin*


 Freedom of expression is the watch word...

devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali
3 posted 2000-02-10 04:27 PM


This was wondefully erotic...may we continue into adult???...you could lengthen this into something wonderful...ummm...ok...I'm shutting up!!! Very intoxicating indeed!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Breathe~
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4 posted 2000-02-10 04:35 PM


Oh no!

Please don't challenge me...I'm just a newbie!!  *LOL*

Actually I had shortened it a bit...to make it a little less racey for this forum... )


 Freedom of expression is the watch word...

Mike
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5 posted 2000-02-10 05:08 PM


An apt name Breathe~  after reading this... you might have a wee bit of trouble with your breathing. Nicely done.
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
6 posted 2000-02-10 05:26 PM


gee this brings back distant memories
I wonder what might happen if I got my wife to read this poem

Rex}<{{{{o>

Breathe~
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7 posted 2000-02-10 06:12 PM


Mike...Thank you!  My breathing steady only for the moment...* )

Rex...well...maybe make some new intoxicating moments?  I've got my fingers crossed for you...*smiling*


 Freedom of expression is the watch word...

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