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Can We Not Just... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California 
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CAN WE NOT JUST... Can we not just - sleep babe, please don't move I feel so close to you My head upon your chest bodies entwined arms around you embracing your heart your heart still pounding so feverishly so hypnotic as I fall I fall into you I feel the blood coursing your veins the soft rise of you breast the moistness of sweet breath slowing slowing calling ....... ..... ... . Babe, please don't move can we not just - sleep... I want to lay like this forever Michael Anderson [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 03-15-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Big sigh!  This is great Michael! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Forever really got me on this one Michael...was beautiful!!! This was soft and gentle and totally heartfelt...I love it!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*sigh*... temps on the rise in passions... very tender and sweet M, very nice take care, jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Forever...*sigh*..I have dreamt these words, this place, these feelings. Nice job Michael. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Okay Michael...you got all us girls sighing now  I just want to say that the tenderness in this piece is beautiful as well as the way it is worded and displayed. Nice poem |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Michael, Can you just please not.... stop writing exquisitly beautiful pieces that make my heart throb? Please? Liz |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I will echo Liz on this Michael ...... Your poetry touches me ........ Love, Shannon |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
Michael...how did you get inside my head and know how I feel each and every night as I lay in LJA's arms and drift off to sleep... Wonderful! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Truly a beautiful poem, Michael......as long as it wasn't written for Christopher  |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Whoever finally snares your heart my dear will be one lucky girlie. *hugs* ~X~ |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Michael: Can't we just play tag instead?...*g* HUSG |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sooooooo Beautiful, Michael! *sigh* Denise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You have delighted me with the tender lovingness of this poem, Michael....and I just have to add a sigh...wonderful! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful. One of the sweetest poems you've written...so far........  |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
devina, forever can be a beautiful thing. Liz, hmmm...(thinking)....nope, can't do it. Shannon, always a blessing to reach into your heart. Lorelei54, you two are surely blessed to have each other. You give us all hope.Balladeer, you're on to me... NOT - Smack!!! X-Angel, never as lucky as you!!! Rainbow - uh, how do you play that? Thanks each and everyone of you for the kind replies. Michael |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You must have "spring fever", my friend...  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh boy. hmmm. wow. (oh yeah.) incredible... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
On to it my friend... Beautiful themes and such a clear plea... 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michael~ To be wrapped in words like this would be the dream of many a 'babe'. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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