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Eyes Of The Shaman
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Eyes Of The Shaman |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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A holy man of a different tradition a labyrinth to walk--transition... beat-heart-beat (spirit rattle) Dreamtime spent in BATTLE. Kundalini--fire--kindled. Chakras spinning, shining beacons... I WILL to pause this ceaseless breathing to hear the wisdom of this deacon. Who is this man who does enchant High Priestess of Immortal Dance? I'd give him not a second glance, but in one glimpse I dared perchance... I blushed to look into his eyes. Now All I've Ever Known is lies. |
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jbowie Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 135BANGOR (that OR) ME |
Black Elk Speaks - through your writing, and the circle of life applies to all matters- nice piece |
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MyPenNameIsSam Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 94usa |
beautiful piece, Serenity. well done -molly aka sam "One does not discover new lands without consenting to lose sight of the shore for a very long time." -Andre Gide |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
WOW!!! This knocked me out of the chair. powerful work here. I am awed, now. This simply scorches you. love it. michael |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is excellent serenity... cryptic and mystic...and so well written good work!! jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
jbowie--thank you for the affirmation. thanks also to molly & Janet Marie Michael--it pleases me to please you! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Your an amazing writer ... and that's no lie your poems and replies are loved and that's no lie either that's two well it's a start  Rex}<{{{{o> |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you Rex Allen, and I'd like to make clear that in no way did I intend to imply that ANYONE was a liar...lol. That last line was intended to portray an altering of consciousness...(Sometimes i feel so misunderstood...)But thanks to all. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
We really do love your poetry serenity and I couldn't resist the chance to pull your leg a little Rex}<{{{{o> |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you serenity. I love this and am very pleased with what you wrote knowing what I know about it. You have a way of saying things without actually being direct. Adds so much more to what is written and makes it a much more visual piece. Keep up the great work am let me know when you need inspiration maybe I can do it again. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Rich, is NOW too soon? |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sound to me that you ahve a wonderfully accurate muse...this was true to legend, and once having known a Shaman, yes all else is lies! Well done indeed~ If I have made you smile today, then I have done my job! ~* Mysteria *~ |
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