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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Commentary Sweet spring Fruit trees fragrant Blossoms yielding tomorrows. Babies without tears clutched against the breast of panic thrown across the bony hip of poverty Sweet spring? Yielding what tomorrows? |
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LittleBoyLost Junior Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 28 |
Martie, this is very good and very touching. I thought the first part was going to be a haiku and was a little disappointed until I read the second half. Very sad but oh so good. LBL |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Poingnant piece. Touches on the realism of today. Wonderful work again, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Martie. Sad but true commentary. Denise |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
such a sad reality the never ending perpetual poverty we need to be reminded now and again we have fed supper to some of these small children ... lost count of the times Rex}<{{{{o> |
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