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Open Poetry #6

Climax (a haiku)

bboog
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 303
Valencia, California

0 posted 2000-03-14 02:04 PM

Emerald green eyes.
Widening, upward, glowing.
Sexy semaphores.

jbouder
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since 1999-09-18

Posts 2534
Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash

1 posted 2000-03-14 02:24 PM

b-

I'm still thinking about this one which means, at least to me, that you've done a good job with this one. Eyes as semaphores ... hmmm.

Jim

INclan
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since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

2 posted 2000-03-14 04:48 PM

BBoog,

Nicely done. There is indeed something about green eyes that is enchanting. I applaud your use of semaphore. While not in common usage...the word is exactly correct. I see that you were not the least bit subtle about it...lol

INclan

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

3 posted 2000-03-14 04:52 PM

boogie baby.... very cool

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

4 posted 2000-03-14 04:58 PM

Awesome, bboog!

Cor

LittleBoyLost
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since 2000-03-14

Posts 28

5 posted 2000-03-14 08:12 PM

I agree with jbouder and INclan. Semaphore is the perfect word for green eyes. Thank you.

bboog
Member

since 2000-02-29

Posts 303
Valencia, California

6 posted 2000-03-15 02:33 AM

To Jim, INclan,Local Reb,Cor & LBoyL, Thank you all for taking your time to read and respond. Your donations are tax deductible of course. Now back to reading Harry Potter to my sons!
best regards,
bboog

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