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To Share Our Dream
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To Share Our Dream |
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Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
To Share Our Dream Venus with all her glory shall not compare unto thy beauty. My elusive queen your gaze has bewildered this Knight. Your face is liken unto a goddess adorned with the shimmerings of love. Never have mine eyes beheld such wonderous beauty, though only once have I seen thy beauty as ye walked in thy garden in full moon. Ye live on in my dreams by day and by night, but to have only a glimpse of thee in my dreams is more than this Knight can endure. Sorrow engulfs me as my heart crys out, when shall I hold thy softness, when shall I taste thy sweetness? Mine passion for wanting to hold thee and savor thy pleasures grows stronger with each passing beat of mine heart. How long shall ye exist only in the corridors of my mind my love? Shall it be my fate that ye are liken unto a rainbow, that most never find? Prolong my nights oh Goddess who sets this soul aflame, and in return I shall burn the whiteness of thy fingers with mine kisses. With soft sweet whispers I shall bring forth all thy passions And to only thee shall mine heart be true. But alas no one knows what dawn will bring unto this lonely Knight. Bearing the dismal future with all its sorrows, I tremble at full day and await till night shall fall but once more To share our dream http://i.am/Loneheart Loneheart |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is wonderful Loneheart! Very romantic and beautiful. Marina |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is beautiful writing loneheart. I too look for someone special to share my dream. Hope you find her. James |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Loneheart! Well written! Denise |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Sigh! HUGS |
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Enola Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138England |
Wonderful, as always. The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
*sighs deeply* wow, talk about romantic  Nicely done |
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Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
This knight does thank ye one and all for such wonderful words of kindness. Though I am not worthy of such praise from so many truly wonderful poets. Mine heart is humbled with much thankfulness. As always Thy Servant Loneheart < !signature--> Loneheart [This message has been edited by Loneheart (edited 03-16-2000).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Another beautiful song, sung by thy hearts cry, another lonely night, with only thy words to keep thee company! LOVED THIS ONE!!! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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