just another rainly sunday

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Open Poetry #6

just another rainly sunday

Diana B
Member

since 2000-03-10

Posts 97

0 posted 2000-03-12 07:22 PM

just another rainy sunday
in my blue shadowed world
clutching out at day dreams
try to wish them real.

see your face before me
and i begin to wonder
is this a game or could this
love we have be real.

i dont think that i could take
another broken heart
for there have been too many
for me again to heal.

count the raindrops falling
on my window sill
thats how many of my tears
i shed for broken promises.

if you dont really want me
dont linger here beside me
make the ending quick
and let me die in peace.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-03-12 07:38 PM

Very sad yet beautifully done, Diana!

Denise

bboog
Member

since 2000-02-29

Posts 303
Valencia, California

2 posted 2000-03-12 07:42 PM

nice imagery. keep writing!
bboog

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-03-12 08:46 PM

DianaB~
These are lovely lines
filled with lovely thoughts.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

4 posted 2000-03-12 10:14 PM

There are always hard times of wondering when in love...so I'm sending you some sunshine to help you through the rain girly!!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

AngelDust
Junior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 30
Minnesota

5 posted 2000-03-12 11:23 PM

Very sad poem, but very well written! Things will get better Diana, they always do. Best of luck to ya

-Jeff Moen-

"I'll lay around and wonder why you were always there for me" - Sugar Ray - Someday

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