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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Questions to answers distant with applause born on waves opaque..... cataracted eyes blinking back the light as darkness stilled emotions sift through fingers numb by love enflamed of itself… an infected wound of isolation. Robert |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I can sense the pleasure in store for me whenever I spy your sobriquet ...this piece holds true to form. Very nice. ~ Claire |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
A very apt discription my friend. Well written.  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow Robert...this one certainly packs a punch with it |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow. I understand....great poem! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You say so much in so few. Great poem! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree! This is great Robert! Denise |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thanks you guys.......been there done that ya know......online I mean and off. Claire, what in the world is a sobriquet????  } |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Robert, sobriquet just means your byline, your pen name. Sorry 'bout that... Wonderful writing! ~ Claire |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Haunting music plays from the CD at my side tears roll gently down my cheeks, tears I cannot hide the world is so much larger, cybernetically but oh, how I wish I could feel you dance with me. I long to feel the length of you, your arm around my waist long to sway to the tune, hands together, fingers laced soon, the song will end, another in it’s place the dance will end again without a glimpse of your face. Dance with me tonight, across the cyber seas hold me in your arms, give my hand a squeeze close your eyes as we dance by internet’s design you, there in your world, I here in mine. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
wow PDV.....very accurate in description.. memories...... |
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