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Life is a wife
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Life is a wife |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Life is a wife The best for me will ring a bell, The rest can all, just go to hell. It is the banner that some wave. Perhaps a seeker, or a knave. I've seen the banner in the flack, I've felt its touch upon my back. I've heard its voice in simple say, I've seen it pass along the way. Where lies the petals of the rose. I sniff the air the perfumes pose. I've learned the odors of request, Acknowledging the very best. I do not say them false or true, This is an answer up to you. I only say beware the beast. That offers up the most for least. Appraise, your answers in your life, For your answer will be your wife. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent Sy! I really like this. You nailed the meter and rhymes.  |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Sy! The lesson is clear and the meter smooth, the rhyme is well done. hmmm I wish I could write like this.  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wise words! Wonderful poem! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Such wonderful thoughts. Wise and true. A wise man knows it to be so. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
You words speak of great wisdom and I will indeed use the wonderful tips that you give! Nathan |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
....beware the beast that offers up the most for least.....great line Sy!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Poet deVine, Thank you for the excellent my friend. *L* Marilyn, You can write like that, thanks for the beautiful comment. Martie, Thank you for the wonderful. *L* Marge, Thank you and love you too. Sy Nate, You welcome to the tips, thanks for the comment. Balladeer, You sure caught the best line. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sy great job well said tracieKeep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You get the sweetheart award with this one Sy, twas very touching!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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