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Sven
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0 posted 2000-03-11 11:15 AM


Her eyes speak to me with love
Two beautiful pools of blue
Showing me an angel sent from above
With skin of fairest hue

I can see the pain they hide
And feel the tears that have been shed
But through the pain I can see the beauty reside
A beauty dying, that needs to be fed

Spring forth beautiful one
From behind the mask that you've hidden
Show us your eyes of blue and hair like the sun
And of your pain be ridden

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Isis
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Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-03-11 05:09 PM


Thanks Sven, glad you rehashed this one  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Marina
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
2 posted 2000-03-11 05:20 PM


Sven, well,well, well...there is another side to you! Who know....or maybe It's because your always showing me your bad side!

I loved this....very tender and sweet.

Marina

Astraea
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3 posted 2000-03-11 05:22 PM


The windows of to our soul is through our eyes put into a poem with care.  One word: lovely.  And all those other synonyms of the word 'beautiful' too.     Nice poem.  

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."



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