Intuition(my first tanka)--do comment

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Intuition(my first tanka)--do comment

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2000-03-11 04:40 AM

Pls refer to this interesting challenge posted by Post deVine in poetry challenge!

Intuition

My sixth sense tells me
My friends aren't from this planet
Loud clothes,Greek lanuage,raw food
techno dance,Pokemon,blades
Aliens from the sun

INclan
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since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

1 posted 2000-03-11 11:55 AM

An interesting poem. I have often wondered about some of my friends. I am not familier with this style....what are the rules of construction?

INclan

[This message has been edited by INclan (edited 03-11-2000).]

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

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2 posted 2000-03-11 08:24 PM

This is great, Kaile!

Denise

Mon Cherie

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since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

3 posted 2001-12-05 12:46 PM

Gosh! I'm sure by that you're not describing me, coz I'm from Planet Earth just like you. Are those new friends you made in NS or uni?

Really interesting people huh.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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