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jbowie
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since 2000-02-18
Posts 135
BANGOR (that OR) ME

0 posted 2000-03-10 09:57 PM



I love the way
your face flaps and ripples
when you lie

I know then
that you decieve me to protect me
because I am weak

but what makes me proud
is when your hand rains demons
red across my face

then you say sorry
that within me lies the fault
because I am weak

the look af dissapointment
when you found I was pregnant
changed something inside

what made me fear
was the birth of my beautiful girl
and when I first truly saw you

would I allow
your heated hand to bruise
the child I bore

no

what made,
forced me,
to kill
was you


 A real man
kisses his children goodnight

© Copyright 2000 James Bowie - All Rights Reserved
Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263

1 posted 2000-03-10 10:54 PM


You've got a strong and sobering message here...very Well done.

~ Claire

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