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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
You red roses would be nice big balloons would be kind colorful candy is just so sweet but what I want is hard to find roses die a shriveling death balloons are full of hot air candy doesn't hide the pounds it adds what I want is extremely rare I know you're wondering what I'd like I'll give you a little clue it may be hidden; it may be rare but it's valuable and priceless, too this Valentine poem has found its end I'm sticking to you like glue because this Valentine's Day, you'll see, that all I want is YOU. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o very sweet yuh too whom it is given great rewards ensue yuh i think thats right [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 02-10-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BobbyCat- This is adorable. Just the cutest valentine greeting. Would make a great e-card ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
Actually, I DID write it for my boyfriend a few years ago (okay, try 6--LOL) because I was too broke to get him a present! LOL  He loved it anyway--said that no one had ever written any poetry for him...awwww!!!!  Bobbycat =^..^= |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
awwww, so sweet and a perfect V-Day gift for anyone! No matter how long ago you wrote it, it can always be used LoL...giving mea good idea for my Valentine LoL Did Jesus laugh? I think He did, 'cause He was once a little kid; and all of us were made with joy both sugar-spice girl and snake-snail boy! |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
*smiling~smiling* Can I borrow this? *hehe* This is a lot of fun!  )Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
Borrow away--I don't mind!! LOL And thanks to everyone for the nice comments--they mean so much! Bobbycat =^..^= |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Bobbycat, cuteness oozes out this poem. Nothing can beat sweetness and sincerity. This is great |
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