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Open Poetry #6

So Far Gone

busylisa_ca
Junior Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 39

0 posted 2000-03-09 09:46 PM

So Far Gone

Everything we had came
and in a flash it was gone.
I thought blood was thicker than water,
Or the sun was brighter than the moon.

Not in a flash, but in an instant
It was thrown away
Nothing to say or do could help
Only a look of devistation and despair.

I never thought anything would come between us
But obviously it was all a fantasy
Now there is no one to turn to
or even to count on
How could such a great thing
turn into something so sour.

I layed it all on the line
And decided it wasn't worth the pain
and agony that was running my heart
While my feelings and dreams come to an end.

mete out
Member

since 2000-02-16

Posts 270
england

1 posted 2000-03-10 09:06 AM

This is such a sad poem.
You put across your loss really well in this.
I know you must feel bad, but here at Passions, you are in our hearts always.

*hug*

I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

twinsgd
Member

since 2000-02-13

Posts 416
Ontario,Canada

2 posted 2000-03-11 08:11 AM

Very sad Lisa , but you can and will turn it around. need a shoulder ....call me..always on line even if invisible.

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