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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
One song was sung, one single song was sung, But one song was enought to make me think Of past days which away have now been flung The notes were played from then to now did link. It was our music, writ for you and I, By ones that, although we had never met, Their lyrics to our lives seem to apply- Their words, our souls, that we will not forget. In three-part harmony, my memories Return-oh! happy hours spent with thee And Time itself does truly seem to freeze And for one moment from pain I am free. So long as we have this sweet melody I will be yours, and mine you'll always be. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Witch's Brat Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 100 |
What? You mean you're STILL hanging around here Elizabeth? Nice to see you again. WB I am a disturbed person, and I write about disturbed people. ~Tennessee Williams |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Elizabeth! We must have a psychic connection! I was just wondering today when you were going to post another poem! Nice to see this!  Denise |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Elizabeth, I just took a wonderful trip back in time thanks to you. Cerenity |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Elizabeth, this really touched my heart and soul, this is really beautiful. Return-oh! happy hours spent with thee..... Just how I'm feeling right now. Well Done.  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Witch's Brat--yes I'm still here. Denise--here it is! Glad you liked it! Cerenity--I hope you enjoyed your trip! Dark Angel--thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it so. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Elizabeth, what a great sonnet you wrote ! I really enjoyed it ! |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Glad you liked it, Munda. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabth~ Lovely ... I liked this line 'In three-part harmony, my memories return' Nice gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Wow, Marge! Thanks! I am honored you liked it enough to pick out a line. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, a beautiful sonnet |
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