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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Your name rolls easily off my tongue, Into the air, My hands seem shaky as if grabbing Something that isn’t there What is this that I feel? An opinion that has never been modified A certain dose of patience Never before known, yet always denied It’s the subject of time That fills my mind It’s the questioning of time That leaves us behind |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
I'm glad I took the time to read your poem for I like it very much. Thanks for sharing it here. [This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 03-08-2000).] |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Me too! I like the take on this! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I see you sit and ponder alot, 'eh? That's good... Very interesting insight into the thing that gets us all....TIME. Not enough of it for sure...I am a dreamer, so it's my worst enemy I fear. LOL  I spend so much time thinking through what I'm going to do, I hardly even get started on a darn thing! hehehe Geat poem! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
HOW did I miss this one earlier??? wow... all that "flirting" must have distracted me from my stalking...see what you've started... LOLthis one is shows your reflective moments their best... I love the last lines... stalking you always..jm ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. janet marie |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A very powerful message. You have a gift and shared it well. Thank you! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent my friend. . . "Time" does lots of things. . . I think that you have found the one thing that we all overlook. . . Wonderful words. . . ---------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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