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Winds; Changeable
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Winds; Changeable |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Winds; Changeable I have seen for some time now on the horizon of my mind clouds on an air mass that I have not breathed before nor touched intimately in that I am more than a cloudwatcher for I understand that everyone who looks upon a cloud owns it and these coming are mine, to me they belong in that the interpretation springs from imaginations deeper than wishes could ever dream of or this ship's Captain would willingly sail to. So they come not from me but to me in preparation of the new horizon on the sea of my mind that has yet to be explored. They tell me… I am the adventurer. do not fear. Robert |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RobertB, this was really nice!  -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RobertB- Your brilliance shines in this piece. 'everyone who looks upon a cloud owns it' 'the interpretation springs from imaginations deeper than wishes could ever dream of' What insight you've opened in me. Well done, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent words, Robert. It's good to live in anticipation of new adventures on the horizon....I've forgotten what that feels like  |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hey - You - Get offa my cloud....  This is neat...!! I totally enjoyed... |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I like, I like, I like this one Robert !  |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
hey Robert ... this doesn't look to me like you're in a slump ... keep those clouds drifting Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent poem, Robert! Denise |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
This is exquisite! I agree with marge..."everyone who looks upon a cloud...owns it"..my favorite line...but all are beautifully written... I am floating...  )Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Wonderful thoughts, so beautifully expressed. There's something about clouds that make you dream. Liz |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thanks to all of you!!! I think that clouds can be very inspiring. Robert |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I like this a great deal |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Love those days when ya can kick back and stare at the clouds. This was truly wonderful Robert! So serene a picture you've painted in my mind! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
I think I will hafta agree with you about everyone who looks at a cloud owns it, just stay away from my cloud dangit ehhe.....Great poem! I enjoyed it greatly! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thanks all of you cloud watchers!!!!! Robert |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Robert, I liked the sense of freedom in imagination you've conveyed here. Wonderfully written! Claire |
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