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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Thoughts From You We snuggled closely together upon the glowing warmth of the summer sand. My eyes reading and gathering thoughts from you. Your crystal heart beating my favorite tune. Your arms embracing all of my hopes and dreams as I dissolve into your tranquility for only the short time that's allowed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Seems like wonderful moments..and you have posted a nice hour glass poem here. James |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
this is great....oh gosh...just love it...you can see the precious moments filtering away as you read....great poem! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Why ... Nurse C., A while ago you did your best to hide your warm and fuzzy , and now you parade it around like the the old "zap" machine's broke and you've got nothing better to do ! |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
jmlee12345, Thank you, very much Corazon, Thank you also, this one just formed itself amazingly Oh, but Dr. Moose I have lots better to do I just choose not to. Need I remind you, you released this Nurse from her pain when it appeared she was going insane. This is the new revised version ready to concur the world and all the men in it. (ROTFLMAO) I'm really not this arrogant guess still just a little crazy. [This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 03-07-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
NurseC~ I like the format and the grains of 'sand' drifting through it. You are extremely gifted. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Marge, Thank you very much, this one amazed even me. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow....this is really creative. An impressive piece of poetry  |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Grains of sand falling Each in memory of love spent within your cup Filling your heart too the brim and over Drowning you in a sea of passion that forever rains like time |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh, how beautiful--to dissolve into your tranquility--lovely! |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Your passion raining as time twenty-four hours of bliss being in heaven today. Seven glorious days, creating one week. Weeks leading through into months souls passion unending a calm river of foreverness while sands of time trickle by. Martie, thank you very much for reading and enjoying. [This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 03-08-2000).] |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
I was left with only wishing the hour glass was bigger.......but I am selfish that way. Beautiful till the last grain of sand.... There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it. |
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