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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-03-07 07:32 AM


Friendship Circle
~*Marge Tindal*~

When things don't go right
in the world outside your door
I wish you shelter from the storm
and loving friends to keep you warm
A hug, a reassuring word, a smile,
these gifts are yours for taking
When friends are close at hand
the friends of your making.


In building friendships
we assure ourselves of this,
someone cares if we are in need
and nothing about us goes unheeded.
Your friendship is so precious to me
it's what I get from you in return.
If I've done my share of caring
it's what you give back to me.
How easy it is to be sincere,
not swayed by others.


You are loved my friend
You're what matters to me
I would not ever give you up
to anothers bargaining greed
They are either inside the
circle of our friendship
or they wait outside
looking in through
their need
I love
you


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 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com           



[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-07-2000).]

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Pepper
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1 posted 2000-03-07 10:34 AM


So true and written with the beauty of your great big heart !!!
Love this I do .......  

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2000-03-07 10:59 AM


Marge,
Beautifully shaped and a wonderful poem.
Your friend,
*L* Sy

Honeybee
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3 posted 2000-03-07 11:08 AM




Marge, this is so touching and sweet.  Very well written.  You have such a caring soul and a big heart.  Your friends are lucky to have you.

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  

jazzgal
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4 posted 2000-03-07 11:10 AM


Love this poem!  The shape makes it even better... beautiful!!!  
Denise
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5 posted 2000-03-07 11:19 AM


Yes, very beautiful, Marge!

Denise

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6 posted 2000-03-07 11:27 AM



Pepper~
A
little
heart has
lots of
love
~


Seymour~
Just
knowing
you like
makes a
happy
me
~


Melissa~
Little heart
puffed up
with
lots
of
LOVE
~


JazzGal~
Welcome
Thank
you
~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Corinne
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7 posted 2000-03-07 11:31 AM


Marge,

your friends are indeed lucky to have you!

Corinne

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8 posted 2000-03-07 02:13 PM


Corinne~
Ahhhhhh! But I am the lucky one !
The circle grows with each new friend.
Thank you, my friend.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Martie
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9 posted 2000-03-07 05:58 PM



Wonderful poem Marge!

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10 posted 2000-03-07 06:53 PM


Marge, your poems are a true reflection of yourself...shapely, beautiful and filled with sincerity.

Another gem from your pen  

Marina
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11 posted 2000-03-07 08:54 PM


Another wonderful original Marge!

Marina

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12 posted 2000-03-07 09:07 PM


Martie~
Thanks,
girlfriend.
I smile
when I
see
you.


Balladeer~
You are just
the greatest!
What a super
guy you
are.


Marina~
So truly
pleased
that you
liked it.


~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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13 posted 2000-03-08 12:40 PM


~~MARGE~~Just another example of the talent and love you share.....The circle widens...
RufffRyder
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14 posted 2000-03-08 12:47 PM


A friendship circle
Oh how nice,
Covered with nothing
But sugar and spice,
This has a very nice flow
But I see more
In this Girl I know,
Take from this
What you will,
Just know that I`m for real.

Thank you mam  


PhaerieChild
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15 posted 2000-03-08 01:23 AM


Marge, Again you amaze me with your talent!! I love your sense of style and your words of beauty that flow from your soul. Well done!!!

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho



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16 posted 2000-03-08 02:20 AM


Marge~ this is touching and so very sweet! -SEA
tracie66
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17 posted 2000-03-08 02:34 AM


Marge this is so beautifully done and so unique...I loved it, you are a friend to all LoL tracie  


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Anne Rooks

Marge Tindal
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18 posted 2000-03-08 06:56 AM


~Warrior~
You, my love, are
just a treasure
to this friend
you have such
measure
Love
you


WildChild~
Thank you for the
words so kind
Friendships
are for
keeping


SEA~
Hello, gal
Nice to
~SEA~
your
smile


Tracie~
Reaching out to
bring a friend
to the circle
that has
no end


~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Christopher
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19 posted 2000-03-08 07:29 AM


At the least, your formatting rocks. At the most, you change my life. Your poetry never fails however, to make a lasting impression!
Marge Tindal
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20 posted 2000-03-08 08:23 AM


Christopher, dear Christopher~
You thrill me
with your praise
Thank you much
for liking
what I do

~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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21 posted 2000-03-08 09:52 AM


THIS IS WHAT TRUE FRIENDSHIP IS ALL ABOUT, AND DOESN'T FEEL GOOD TO HAVE FRIENDS LIKE THIS! I LOVE THIS POEM SO MUCH BECAUSE IT REMINDS ME OF MY BEST FRIEND AND I. EVERYONE IN THIS WORLD NEEDS A TRUE FRIEND TO COUNT ON. SOMETIMES IT IS SO HARD TO FIND TRUE FRIENDS. YOU MUST HAVE MANY, BECAUSE SOMETHING HAD TO INSPIRE YOU TO WRITE SUCH AN EXCELLENT POEM! NICE WORK MARGE!!!!!
Nate Dogg
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22 posted 2000-03-08 11:25 AM


Hey Marge, can I be your friend? I know that you would make a great one. Great poem!

 Nathan

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23 posted 2000-03-08 11:32 AM


Marge...this is beautiful. Love you too  
Marge Tindal
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24 posted 2000-03-08 01:45 PM


Mystery~
Friendship's love
always feels good
I am blessed
with the
love of
many


Nate~
You joined the friendship
circle some time back.
Welcome, my friend.


Hoot~
Thanks, gal.
Me too !
~*Marge*~





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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25 posted 2000-03-08 09:33 PM


Loved your poem, Marge. Can I join your friendship circle?

Elizabeth

 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible


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26 posted 2000-05-23 04:12 PM


This is great, Marge! I know I am pulling up poems past....just can't resist it! I hope you will allow me into this wonderful circle of friends. You are a great lady, Marge....how blessed I feel to know you.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Marge Tindal
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27 posted 2000-05-23 09:11 PM


Elizabeth~
You're in
like Flynn.
A smile even
after all this
time.



Lil' Lizzie~
You just rock !
I'm honored that
you'd care enough
to dig the archives
for my poems.
I love
you ~

~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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28 posted 2004-06-06 06:49 PM


and you are precious
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