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just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN

0 posted 2000-03-07 12:51 PM


Said you were my bestfriend.
Said you would always be there.
Said no matter what i did you would always care.
Said that you loved me.
Said our friendship would never die.
Now I see to you this was all a little lie.
Said that I was ugly.
Said you wanted me to die.
Said you hated me.
Said I was a lie.
Said that we were through.
Now there is nothing left to do but wonder...
What is it i did to you?


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mete out
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 270
england
1 posted 2000-03-07 04:33 AM


***Another_fe,
This poem hit home for me.
I know how it feels to be secure in afriendship one minute and the next, you are abandoned and confused.
Another fantastic piece from you...thanks.

RufffRyder
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since 2000-02-25
Posts 143
<------Over There------>
2 posted 2000-03-07 11:21 PM


Hey U,
dont let this man you talk about get you so down.
Trust me,most everyone here has at one time or another been hurt by another.
You are a sweet young lady with a life full of up`s and down`s ahead of you.
Just like the rest of us but you don`t need to give in to the hurt.
There`s thousands of young men waiting to show you what true love really feels like.
Thank you for the read j.a.f.
P.S.CHEER UP  



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